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@@ -120,14 +120,14 @@ guidelines, it's that it's not the same.
 Recently a solution following this design process called [Snikket] has
 emerged. You can read about its goals [in the introduction
 article][snikket-intro] or in a [more detailed
-explanation][snikket-explanation] from the author. At the time of writing it
+explanation][snikket-explanation] from its author. At the time of writing it
 is composed of a rebranded [Prosody] and Conversations, is entirely based on
-XMPP and it federates with the XMPP network, but the important part is that
-the goal is to provide a set of server and client(s) that works together with
-a common set of guildelines.
+XMPP and federates with the XMPP network. But the important part -- and also
+why it deserves a different name -- is its goal: provide a server and a (set
+of) client(s) that interoperate properly and have similar design.
 
-Maybe you're not part of the target, in which case there might someday be a
-similar solution that's more adapted to your use-case.
+Maybe you're not part of Snikket's target, in which case there might someday
+be a similar solution that's more adapted to your use-case.
 
 For the most technical of us who understand the protocol and/or can deal with
 common design issues, it may be ok to continue using our current clients