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 Who around here hasn't heard about the tragic and inevitable death of XMPP
 (eXtensible Messaging and Presence Protocol)? It's a pretty common topic in
-the community and around, often started by users of XMPP themselves missing
-a certain feature in one or multiple specific implementations, or users of
-alternative solutions. In a way this is my own version of why XMPP is doomed
-(or isn't).
+the community and around, often started by users of XMPP themselves missing a
+certain feature in one or multiple specific implementations, or users of
+alternative solutions. In a way this is my own version of why XMPP is or isn't
+doomed.
 
 To go down this rabbit hole, we first need to set a few definitions. Most of
 my readers would probably know what XMPP is, but I feel obligated to provide a