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@@ -47,10 +47,11 @@ allowing any developer to use custom (XML) elements for their own use, and
 optionally write a specification for their new feature for everyone else to
 use.
 
-XMPP also defines a server/client model, where multiple servers can
-communicate together, thus allowing for [decentralization] -- anyone setting
-up their own server to be free from restrictions of other servers, and
-communicating with the world or part of it.
+XMPP also defines a client-server-server-client model, where a client can talk
+with a server that can then talk with multiple servers before reaching other
+clients, thus allowing for [decentralization] -- anyone setting up their own
+server to be free from restrictions of other operators, and communicating with
+the world or part of it.
 
 [decentralization]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Decentralization#Technological_decentralization