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 ### DOAP - Description Of A Project
 
-[There][list1] [are][list2] [many][list3] [different][list4] [lists][list5]
-[of][list6] [XMPP software][list7], each listing the favourite features of the
-author, being displayed in various ways, having specific highlights, being more
-or less up to date and maintained, and generally not really usable by a
-machine. The [DOAP project][DOAP_GH] provides a way for each project to host a
+[Lists][list1] [of][list2] [XMPP][list3] [software][list4] are not machine
+readable and the information contained within them varies in quality.  The
+[DOAP project][DOAP_GH] provides a way for each project to host a
 [semantic][Semantic_web] description of itself, which can then be used by
 anyone to display information about XMPP software.