sprint-lyon: Rework phrasing, capitalisation, and some links

Signed-off-by: Maxime “pep” Buquet <pep@bouah.net>

content/posts/sprint-lyon.md

@@ -56,24 +56,25 @@ into the XEP pages (an example can be seen here for [Bookmarks][DOAP_Example]).
 
 ### Reactions
 
-Some time ago, [Movim][Movim] [implemented reactions][Movim_Reactions] using the [Message
+Some time ago, [Movim][Movim] [implemented reactions][Movim_Reactions] using
-Attaching specification][XEP_0367]. [Dino][Dino] developers felt that the situation could
+the [Message Attaching][XEP_0367] specification. [Dino][Dino] developers felt
-be improved, especially some issues with non-supporting clients, and started
+that the situation could be improved, especially some issues with
-working on a new specification a few weeks ago. The protoXEP has been submitted
+non-supporting clients, and started working on a new specification a few weeks
-[to the inbox][XEP-Reactions] this weekend!
+ago. The protoXEP has been sent to [the inbox][XEP-Reactions] this weekend!
 
-Edhelas [reworked the Movim implementation][Movim_Reactions_Commit] using this new specification,
+Edhelas [reworked][Movim_Reactions_Commit] the Movim implementation using this
-mathieui worked on an implementation in poezio (not yet merged, but [the
+new specification, mathieui worked on an implementation in [Poezio][Poezio]
-Slixmpp bits are][Slix_Reactions]), and fiaxh and larma started an [implementation in
+(not yet merged, but [the Slixmpp bits are][Slix_Reactions]), and fiaxh and
-dino][Dino_Reactions].
+larma started an [implementation in Dino][Dino_Reactions].
 
 
 [Movim]: https://movim.eu
 [Movim_Reactions]: https://nl.movim.eu/?node/pubsub.movim.eu/Movim/movim-is-the-first-xmpp-client-that-supports-message-reactions-Id7F5J
-[XEP_0367]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0367.html
+[XEP_0367]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0367.xml
 [Dino]: https://dino.im
 [XEP-Reactions]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/inbox/reactions.html
 [Movim_Reactions_commit]: https://github.com/movim/movim/commit/24e4d5d18b36940f853a2fc18f316cb3c83f12a4
+[Poezio]: https://poez.io
 [Slix_Reactions]: https://lab.louiz.org/poezio/slixmpp/commit/b50bfb2f34a3ace3a70b1647f54ad6a0e761acf7
 [Dino_Reactions]: https://github.com/dino/dino/tree/fiaxh/reactions
 
@@ -82,10 +83,10 @@ dino][Dino_Reactions].
 [Occupand-id][XEP-Occupant-id] is a protoXEP that was also submitted by larma
 this weekend.
 
-It mandates that MUC components provide a stable and unique id that is
+It mandates that [MUC][XEP_0045] components provide a stable and unique id
-attributed per room per user (real JID). This can be used in semi-anonymous
+that is attributed per room per user (real JID). This is especially useful
-rooms, where it is usually not possible to ensure messages are coming from the
+semi-anonymous rooms, where it is usually not possible to ensure messages are
-same participant between rejoins.
+coming from the same participant between rejoins.
 
 Some clients are talking about requiring occupant-id for features like Last
 Message Correction, or Reactions, in semi-anonymous rooms.
@@ -94,30 +95,31 @@ A [prosody module][Prosody-occupant-id] is now available and is usable with the
 current release (0.11) or trunk.
 
 [XEP-Occupant-id]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/inbox/occupant-id.html
+[XEP_0045]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0045.xml
 [Prosody-occupant-id]: https://modules.prosody.im/mod_muc_occupant_id.html
 
 ### And more
 
 PulkoMandy started porting [Jabber4Haiku][Jabber4Haiku] -- now renamed Renga
--- to gloox.  Fiaxh worked on [stable and unique IDs][XEP_0359] in dino.
+-- to gloox.  Fiaxh worked on [stable and unique IDs][XEP_0359] in Dino.
 Slixmpp finally [uses non-predictable ids][Slix_predictable_ids].  Mathieui
 and I worked around issues with asynchronous APIs in Poezio and Slixmpp.
 xmpp-parsers got a new [release][xmpp-parsers-0.14], fixing
 [documentation][xmpp-parsers-docs] on the way!
 
 [Jabber4Haiku]: https://github.com/HaikuArchives/Jabber4Haiku
-[XEP_0359]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0359.html
+[XEP_0359]: https://xmpp.org/extensions/xep-0359.xml
 [Slix_predictable_ids]: https://lab.louiz.org/poezio/slixmpp/commit/b29bb30eb7bb46ce2b945efed55a265324e05383
 [xmpp-parsers-0.14]: https://gitlab.com/xmpp-rs/xmpp-parsers/blob/fb71acd8d13db734d8a742e0b8b9604b171333c9/ChangeLog
 [xmpp-parsers-docs]: https://docs.rs/xmpp-parsers
 
 ### What's next
 
-I'd like to thank [Wisolv][Wisolv] again for hosting us.
+I'd like to thank [Wisolv][Wisolv] again for hosting us this weekend.
 
-In August, members of the community will be present at [FrosCon][FrosCon] at
+Next month, members of the community will be present at [FrosCon][FrosCon] at
 the XMPP booth, and at [CCCamp2019][Camp]. See our [events page][Events] for
-more events!
+more information about future events!
 
 [FrosCon]: https://froscon.de/en/
 [Camp]: https://wiki.xmpp.org/web/Camp2019